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Can someone help me to correct this little English text please? And maybe use better words to describe it? Thank you. After I had changed my clothes and put on my makeup, I stood in front of the mirror and brushed my long, brown hair. I had never been the type that curled her hair before a party or did some special hairstyle. For me hair was just hair and since I know that it'll be incredibly hot if I keep them open I always bring two hairties with me, in case one rips, which has happened before.

.....put on makeup..... never been the type to curl my hair or put it into some elaborate hairstyle

..... and since I knew that it’d be incredibly alluring to keep it open I made a habit of bringing two hairties with me....

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After I had changed my clothes and put on my makeup, I stood in front of the mirror and brushed my long, brown hair. I had never been the type that curled her hair before a party or had a special hairstyle. For me hair was just hair and since I know that it would be incredibly hot if I keep let my hair down, I always bring two hair bands with me just in case one rips, which has happened before.

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