What's Important in life. there are a lot of Things that are important for our life but in My Opinion there are some Points very Important . At First is a good health very Important when you are for example sick and you are not happy with your life than is money Not everything you can buy with money Everything but when you have a Bad illness than is Money nothing.
Kann mir das bitte jemand korrigieren
Soll ich es auch schöner formulieren?
The Second Important thing is to have a happy and durable relationship. It is Important to have a Partner by your side sometimes you feel alone or you are sad than You Need someone who loves you and keeps you motivated to fight.
Das wäre Teil 2
Einen Moment :)
Es kommt etwas noch dazu
In welche Klasse gehst du?
There are a lot of things that are important for our life but in my opinion the following points are the most important ones: At first, a good health and happiness is neccessary in each person‘s life and much more important than money because we all know that we cannot buy happiness with that.
The Next important thing for life is to have a well-paid Job it is important to have a good Job because then you are able to help Other people with Money for example and this was also the fourth point being able to help other people.
The second most important thing to be in a happy and durable relationship. It is important to have a partner by your side who strengthens you and has your back. Sometimes we feel lonely and sad. Having a loving partner who deeply loves you helps you to keep on fighting.
Und zum Schluss hab ich a clear conscience aber weiß leider garnicht was ich dazu schreiben soll
The third important thing in life is to have a well-paid job. By having a job you can help other people for example by donating money to the poor ones. The point has already been announced in my previous statement. Being able to help others is another important thing in life that has to be considered.
Du hast das schon sehr gut geschrieben! Ein Großteil deines Satzbaus und deiner Formulierungen ist richtig, ich habe es nochmal umformuliert, damit es etwas schöner klingt 😊
Wie zum Schluss a clear conscience? Wie heißt denn genau die Aufgabenstellung?
Das man reines Gewissen im Leben haben muss
The second most important thing IS to be in a happy and durable relationship. It is important to have a partner by your side who strengthens you and has your back. Sometimes we feel lonely and sad. Having a loving partner who deeply loves you helps you to keep on fighting GIVES US STRENGTH
Das großgeschriebene hab ich hier vergessen!
Danke vielmals ❤️
Sollst du das mit dem reinen gewissen auch noch in den Text packen?
Ne muss nicht sein
Ist schon ok so